Ms. Pawel seemingly fails to grasp that the phrasing "Students on University of California campuses may struggle with basic math, but they are graduating at record rates." strongly implies that said graduates also struggle with basic math.
"What has made the University of California exceptional is its commitment to increase access without sacrificing excellence. [..] Students on University of California campuses may struggle with basic math, but they are graduating at record rates."
Ms. Pawel seemingly fails to grasp that the phrasing "Students on University of California campuses may struggle with basic math, but they are graduating at record rates." strongly implies that said graduates also struggle with basic math.
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"What has made the University of California exceptional is its commitment to increase access without sacrificing excellence. [..] Students on University of California campuses may struggle with basic math, but they are graduating at record rates."